Score: 6

"That was a surprise..."

submission: A Friendly Squirrel

date: October 3, 2008

I was waiting to see what the squirrel would do to him out of revenge, and was totally surprised with the ending that took place. Got a good shock laugh out of me. Thank you.
The Avenging Angel

Score: 4

"Not my favorite."

submission: A Bitter Revenge

date: October 3, 2008

Still it was very funny to others, so there is obviously a goood bit of merit to it. Good stuff, I am really enjoying your work.
The Avenging Angel

Score: 8

"Great fucking idea!"

submission: "Smoking" Can Kill You

date: October 3, 2008

I loved it. I wish the people that reviewed these would get over the animation though. South Park's got shitty animation, but it works. Same goes for the Junkyard Animations. Good stuff, keep it up!
The Avenging Angel

Score: 6

"Pretty decent."

submission: "Hey Mom"

date: October 3, 2008

I have to say I liked it. Too many people here seem to think that if it doesn't work for them then it shouldn't work for anyone. "I don't get it, this sucks!" And my favorite "You shouldn't have disrespected the charascter's mother" Oh Lordy Lord! Don't do that!!! Please. It's not about you.
This was short sweet and I had a great laugh.
The Avenging Angel

Score: 4

"Ouch..."

submission: "Don't Be Late For Work"

date: October 3, 2008

Way too long and complicated. Wouldn't be so bad if you could pick up where you left off, but every time you die you have to start back at the beginning. Theonly good thing is that you can skip the intro. If I had to sit through that every time I'd slit my wrists. Anyway, for your first game, I'd say not half bad.
Avenging Angel

Score: 7

"The anxiety"

submission: Babysitter

date: October 3, 2008

What made it more than just a fair animation, what made it great was the feeling of anxiety that you could see the babysitter had looking at that cat post. Like an alchoholic looking at a big bottle of Jack, feeling that thirst, that he just has to drink from that bottle. Good stuff.

Score: 9

"Crazy-ass shit, man..."

submission: Bowl Of Soup II

date: October 3, 2008

I was browsing the front page last night foor the first time in ages and I saw a link for your animations. So, I have been exposed to you for less than one day and I am an addict. I'm not sure what attracts me more, the awkward, horrifying things you put in your stories or seeing the mixed reactions in the reviews. Judging from trainhobo's review, it appears you have attracted the mentally insane...or incompetent.
My only suggestion is that you keep it up. Can't wait to see the third one.
The Avenging Angel

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: Code:R.E.D. Episode 1

date: August 4, 2007

Especially for a first entry. Be interesting to see a little dialogue going on in the "To Be Continueds"
Avenging Angel

Score: 7

"Another hard one, man."

submission: Debbie Doll

date: July 15, 2007

I checked out this game after playing your new one, "Late night at the office". I said that one was too hard, due to the difficulty involved in getting the girl "into" it. I never got past the first level, though it was partly due to what I have to work with.
In this case, I have to say it is too difficult as well. There are an awful lot of combinations and you do not explain how to use certain things. Some are obvious, on the other hand, I imagine there are a few players who couldn't even get the girl naked. From there I had to try and figure out how to make the breasts bigger, finally realizing that each bra gave her a different size breasteses. I still haven't figured out how to change her skin color. There are only three areas on her body where the mouse pointer turns to a hand. I tried changing the color of the hair to see if that would check the skin, nothing that I could tell.
Then, as a far as getting the camera to come up goes, do you realize how many permutations are involved in this game? Only nine bonus shots, which I assume means nine different combinations that will bring up the camera...It would take FOREVER. You should consider changing things. At least go into more detail in your instructions.
Maybe you should ake a password access gallery for the nine bonus pics. Then you could give out the password, or if someone ever makes it through the game without dying of old age, they can post it in the reviews, and those of us that were not so valient as those who live more than 1 century can get the payoff...
Just some suggestions.
Avenging Angel

Score: 7

"Too hard. Not good, buddy."

submission: Late @ Office

date: July 15, 2007

I realize there has to be a chalenge, but try to remember the players when you do this. I don't have a regular mouse and use a touchpad on my laptop. The meter gets high, but at a certain point I can ever get it to go higher because I can't keep the hand in the correct area, or moving at the right rythym.
You may want to imporve that.
Avenging Angel